Do you know what I got when I read this? Community! You are surrounded by people who love you and who you have built strong enough relationships with that they will "go look" and support you! What a wonderful way to be.
not sure what inspired the third person perspective but I love it. the combination of the rich details of your writing, bringing you and your readers so close to the experience, with the playful distance of the 3rd person perspective is a very engaging contrast.
Clayton offering to look for the fanny pack, "It will be okay," the landlord texting STOP, the $85.35 Amazon charge... oh man... CLASSIC.
This morning Sam said, "Wait till you read Emma's newsletter," and then, "You're her." Hahaha
Also, LOVED the third person perspective. I want to try this format.
Do you know what I got when I read this? Community! You are surrounded by people who love you and who you have built strong enough relationships with that they will "go look" and support you! What a wonderful way to be.
And a beautifully told tale, Emma.
Seriously! I'm like, oh her friend will just go downtown for her to look for her fanny pack?
not sure what inspired the third person perspective but I love it. the combination of the rich details of your writing, bringing you and your readers so close to the experience, with the playful distance of the 3rd person perspective is a very engaging contrast.
Great call on her part, right Rick?
I hate when that happens!